Age/Gender: 22, Male
Location: Manchester, UK
Job: Student
I'm a voice actor and writer (with my first script 'Star Wars: The 'Special' Edition' attaining front page status)
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Exp. Points: 120 / 180
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Voting Pow.: 3.68 votes
BBS Posts: 12 (0.01 per day)
Flash Reviews: 16
Music Reviews: 1
Trophies: 3
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16 Reviews | 9 w/ Responses
The only I didn't hear that I wanted to but I digress. I haven't laughed so hard in a while, that was brilliant especially considering you had to write a script from pre-existing lines. Thank you! (Please do this with Sonic Adventure if you feel the need to do a follow up)
Author's Response:
I was trying to work that quote in when I was doing the script, but I couldn't.
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Even better than Irod Bad - You have do ones for Hancock, The Incredible Hulk and The Dark Knight and even the new Mummy when they come out. Then sir you will be a true legend .
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I loved the animation style in this but the fact that its a 4 year old story shows in the lack of maturity. That said I'd love to see you do an original action piece in a similar style in terms of the fights and effects. (and I'd love to write one for you) Well done on a technically brilliant flash.
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"You should really cast some other people."
OK, this a general review of all your FG flashes. The animation is great, the script's are OK but timing and voices need work. For timing, the space in between lines is too long and isn't necessarily funny. Also I think you should release an episode in no more than 2 parts. Your Peter is very good but to be frank the others aren't. Brian is totally wrong, he sounds too young. As for Stewie, that's about a 6/10 cos the voice is nearly there but the performance doesn't bring out the character. His eccentricities in no way come across. In an earlier flash, Quagmire and Brain sound almost the same. I respect you for doing all this, but you should really cast some VAs in roles other than Peter. (PM me and I'll point you in the right direction.)
Author's Response:
I redid the timing. I do it in small parts because my flash lags if its any longer. I stated at the top my brian voice isnt the best...i think it at least suits him tho. My quagmire and brian voice sound nothing alike.
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I agree with the last guy, it's too soon. It's basically insulting Steve Irwin, he died doing what he loved and this just dishonoured. I liked the music but that's because I watched the TV show it's from as a kid. In future if you're gonna make a flash on impulse (e.g. hearing this music after someone is killed by a stringray) do it tastefully or just don't bother.
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It reminded me a little of Peep Show without the sililoquies (probably splet that wrong) and of the show Rob Brydon did while sat in a car. Very nice, I found that funny, subtle but good none the less. (If you ever need an alternative voice over for a sequel in the same vain PM me.)
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The pirates sounded more like a hybrid between Irish, Welsh and Canadian accents rather than Jamaican to me. And that monkey noise is amazing. I still liked the movie as whole but next time find someone who can pull off a convincing Jamaican accent.
Author's Response:
thanks ill get some one better for the sequel
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"Could be a cool series if treated properly."
I liked the idea though this initial episode dragged a little. The graphics were good though. The next episode could have a race in it, with a commentator and Speed Racer (Mark 5 ha, ha) style dialogue in it. The looped meows got a little annoying though, you either need custom meows (done by people weird I know) or actual voice work. (pm me cos I can do either)
Author's Response:
Ok I might PM you... if you charge money i cant use you because im broke
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That was pretty good, animation was good. One flaw though, you guys are little too young to convincing pull off those character's voices. It kinda spoilt the movie a little. It's still good though so well done.
Author's Response:
Well yea ur right about the voices. I probally need voice actors or something. but its kinda for the humor. Thanks for the good review.
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I said with the last one and I'm saying it again, TEXT to SPEECH bad. Voice acting much better. Hell, pm me and I'll do the voices for you. (I'm a voice actor btw). Apart from that I love the concept but the humour is lost in the current voices.
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