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I am the great Leon!

The only I didn't hear that I wanted to but I digress. I haven't laughed so hard in a while, that was brilliant especially considering you had to write a script from pre-existing lines. Thank you! (Please do this with Sonic Adventure if you feel the need to do a follow up)

PuffballsUnited responds:

I was trying to work that quote in when I was doing the script, but I couldn't.

You should really cast some other people.

OK, this a general review of all your FG flashes. The animation is great, the script's are OK but timing and voices need work. For timing, the space in between lines is too long and isn't necessarily funny. Also I think you should release an episode in no more than 2 parts. Your Peter is very good but to be frank the others aren't. Brian is totally wrong, he sounds too young. As for Stewie, that's about a 6/10 cos the voice is nearly there but the performance doesn't bring out the character. His eccentricities in no way come across. In an earlier flash, Quagmire and Brain sound almost the same. I respect you for doing all this, but you should really cast some VAs in roles other than Peter. (PM me and I'll point you in the right direction.)

minimullen7 responds:

I redid the timing. I do it in small parts because my flash lags if its any longer. I stated at the top my brian voice isnt the best...i think it at least suits him tho. My quagmire and brian voice sound nothing alike.

Earthworm Jim Returns

That was pretty good, animation was good. One flaw though, you guys are little too young to convincing pull off those character's voices. It kinda spoilt the movie a little. It's still good though so well done.

shane-connor responds:

Well yea ur right about the voices. I probally need voice actors or something. but its kinda for the humor. Thanks for the good review.

It's cool but ...

Text to speech engines are NO substitute for voice acting. It took something away i.e. any kind of emotion, from the flash which is a shame because I really like the concept. I recommend you try at least one episode with a VA. (You may get a shock.)

luzifer-cr responds:

Thanks for your review!

Of course, I expected that not everyone will be able to see past the lack of voice acting (or barely anyone ;) ), but I hope as the series progresses most people who like the humour will just get used to it.
I MIGHT try to the whole voice acting myself, but I'm not able to do too many voices which would really limit my possibilites. Besides, in later episodes there is a character with a British accent and right now I'm not 100% capable of imitating one. ;)

Cool Idea.

That was pretty good for a first flash. The concept for it was also really good and with some development could become a really good series. I think some proper voice work could work better than clips which were slightly hard to follow. Nice work anyway.

electricamish responds:

thank you mate i will take your advice into consideration

I was proud to be apart of this.

One word... Brilliant. The best thing is I got to be apart of it. I played Obi-Wan and having read most of the reviews on here any criticism of my performance is welcomed and I'm grateful for it. But before you absolutely slam it bare in mind that to do the part I had to try and make myself sound 20 years older while imagining everything you see in the flash.

(Oh and to that idiot who said Obi-Wan couldn't make his mind up if he was english or not. I'm english you tard!)

Gus-Saldanha responds:

Great job man thanx for everything!

I'm a voice actor and writer (with my first script 'Star Wars: The 'Special' Edition' attaining front page status)

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